Mind if I print this out and hang it on my wall?

I LOVE this piece Brit! It's so simple yet so complex at the same time.

OMG, I must fav. lol

Yea it fine as long as u dont try to steal it 'n say it's ur's but i dont think you'd do that! Thanx in the comments!

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+.:Brittany Nicole:.+

Honesty Is A Killer... But Repetiveness Can Be Annoying Unless Used In A Creative Way Not In A Rambling One.

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_{True success is not as accurately gauged by desirability of results as it is by Integrity of intentions.}

ok...?

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+.:Brittany Nicole:.+

Im not trying to be a dick. I mean the repetitiveness was ok but The second and third to last lines are kinda oblivious sounding.
I mean "tell me Im beautiful and perfect" is one of those things that should go without asking.
Guys should know that MOST girls like to hear that, its all based on wether or not they actually mean it.

And the next line is just....well with love has to come honesty. And the truth hurts sometimes, I mean if you were doing something self destructive or acting in a way he didnt like then he couldnt tell you because thats not what you want to hear...which in turn would begin the end of him. With love you have the most beautiful things in life and the most hideous. If you want an example sometime then just ask Jess. I wasnt the greatest guy and she wasnt the greatest girl but we were honest with each other and in turn that made us fall in love more. I mean hell me and jess has been together for 4 and a half years.

Rambling....sorry.

I am sorry if this is mean. You put art up on DA to be critisized, and thats what I did.
Basically I wont say its a bad poem but it has a lot of loose ends for deeper thinkers, in which this poem is like middle school love.

No Offence.


~Clinton



"Life And Love Isn't Perfect."

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"Hey Pete, where you going with that axe in your hand?
- I'm Going down to kill my baby, you know I caught her fucking every guy in town."

Type O Negative- Hey Pete

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Thanx for the criticism... i guess. But if u dont like the repeativeness dont read my stuff. If u dont like what im writing about, once again... dont read my stuff. What i wrote about doesnt really have any special significance to me i just wrote about it and it sounded good to me and i liked it. So once again if u dont like my stuff dont read it and i didnt take the criticism personally or ne thing... as an artist people are going to put me down and dislike my work and ill ahve to accept that just like i've excepted ur criticism and comments...

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+.:Brittany Nicole:.+

That Was Really Contradicting....

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_{True success is not as accurately gauged by desirability of results as it is by Integrity of intentions.}

Whatever... just leave me alone....

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+.:Brittany Nicole:.+

Tis Cool. I Will.

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_{True success is not as accurately gauged by desirability of results as it is by Integrity of intentions.}